Black Ghost

Happy Valentine’s Day On this day there is no thunder As love is soaring through the air, I look up at the sky and shudder to wonder How I was ...

awesome! stupendous! synonyms for those words! Haifa would be proud! (i don't really know)

Kneeling next to Max, Joe had to figure out what he was going to do. This kid must have a mom or dad, right? But then why did they leave ...

Interesting beggining but some people may not agree with you. Like me cuz i think life is short. But never mind me and Is going to be a story or ...

it thought it was funny although it didn't really rhyme(i dont think it's supposed too) anyway it was good.(what is c-day? christmas?) really caputres a girl when she gets the ...

Joe picked up his bat and began trudging across the wet grass to find his baseball. Usually, Joe would leave any missing baseballs behind, but since this was the only ...

sorry for that last post. first of all "Though may not notice me at this time." change it to Though "you" may not notice me at the time. and add ...

Ok i think that you have to

I really really enjoyed this story. There is no more critiquing to be done but i just wanted to say that it kept me interested the whole time and has ...

Max had just stepped through the door, and was now spiraling down through white light, being blinded the entire time. He felt as if swimming through water, and was unable ...

The white ball began to glow very bright, and the haze was forcibly drawn to it. "Then let us go," the white ball said, and the both of them rocketed ...

I hope everyone likes my new story!

He comes with the maddening eyes of a bull who's seen red Charging through the open doors of your soul and breaking what left inside Shattering you, the pieces falling ...

simply. amazing.

Nothing. There was absolutely nothing- a vast and unending void, so still with no noise and nothing that could break the silence. Maybe every now and then a small, incomprehensible ...